Police recovered dead bodies of three girls from a water tank in Orangi Town on Saturday. SP Shahjahan Khan told journalists that dead bodies of three girls were recovered from a water tank of a cattle farm in Merajul Nabi colony of Orangi town.
The girls, who are said to be sisters, have been identified as Uzma, Nisha and Sumera. The neighbors said they saw the dead bodies at 8:00 in the morning and informed the police.
Aunt of the dead girls said the father of the girls saw their bodies in the morning while the brother said the whole family slept after eating dinner last night and when they woke up in the morning they found the three sisters dead.
According to the police, the initial cause behind the death seems to be drowning however it’s too early to be certain. They also said that two of the girls were handicapped.
Oh lord, such shoddy reporting! Okay, let me help you out here as I'm not a troll. 🙂
It should be THE aunt of the dead girls.
Their father, not the father of the girls, one principle of journalism is to use words economically after all.
Full stop after morning; long sentences are not a good thing when you're a journalist. So it should be their brother said the family slept.
Its not LAST night! It would be last night if it was a direct quote, this is an indirect quote so it should be the previous night, holy shit, you guys have lousy sub-editors, I mean, COME ON! That's such a silly mistake, hire sub-editors that are fluent in English!
When they woke up in the morning, they found the sisters dead? Really? Why does your second paragraph say that the NEIGHBOURS found them dead then?
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